Padawan training

Painting \ Figure | 10/08/05 @666 | Akebono | critiques (5) | views (1005)

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I've changed few things ,accordingly to critics commentary

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beatrizmatar

10/08/05 @888

I agree with the concept. Good work.

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Bea

curlyhair

10/09/05 @428

Great compo,good motion
Very nice
The sky lookes a bit empty though
9+/10

Smoke-x365

10/09/05 @805

Good work but...
-The lighting on the planet looks strange
-the ambience on the saber, well, it looks like what you get when you crop a piece wrong. The way it's comes up to a square in the top left of the character area. You see what I'm getting at?!

anyways, good work.

Andy--Jones

10/09/05 @825

very good.I like the composition and the style. I think the bottom of the stalagmites could use a little more definition. Always good to see Star Wars art.

Wysiwyg

10/10/05 @579

The lens flare....kill the lens flare!!!!

This is really a good tribute piece IMO. The atmosphere you set was done very well. I agree that the planet in the sky is a bit distracting....some desaturation may be in order.

I like the DOF you tried for with the one glob in the front as well.

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